City Desk demo
Yes the Audio quality is better but the voice could still use a lot of improving. Hire a professional voice-over artist Joel! They are not terribly expensive and the quality shows.
main problem with the demo is that joel's face is sit on the recycle bin on the right-lower corner.
Counterpoint: it's professional "enough". It's personalized in effect by using an actual person and not a no-name voiceover.
A better idea would be to everyone in Fog Creek to give a voice over demo, the best one gets a 200% bonus and a 6 wek vacation this year:-)
everyone? Last I heard Fog Creek was a 2-man shop, including Joel.
you, heard wrong!
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